martes, 18 de mayo de 2010

Almost a corpse

One day, when I was a child, I was in my grandparent´s home. This home has a pool, where all weekends my brother, my sister and me swam.
In the pool, they have games of water, like sponges and floaters. On that time, I was in love of games with lives colours and more if there are in the water. But at that moment, I didn´t know how to swimming, and also I had scary of water.
But, when we are children, we never think about the consequences of our actions. Unfortunately when I saw the sponges in the water, I jumped to grab the games!


When I jumped to grab the sponge, he could see me. He said what in my intents to swimming, I drank a lot of water, and he didn´t know swimming so good.

So, the way between us was so longer. When he could take me out of water, he shouted to my father, who gave me first aid. My mother was really scared, and I do remember the face of my grandparent when he could see me.

In this story, the hero was my brother, and I´m completely sure what, if he hadn´t saw me, I wouldn´t writing these words.

1 comentario:

Arturo Licona dijo...

Hello Mr. Santana,

I'm not commenting about your errors because you didn't correct the ones I pointed at in your last entry.

Your grade: 12/20